2019年山东省青岛市中考英语满分作文

2019 年山东省青岛市中考英语满分作文人生中有很多第一次：第一次学游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一 次做家务；第一次赢得比赛；第一次……．请根据提示，就你的第一次…… 写一篇短文． 内容包括：1． 第一次……的整个过程； 2． 你的感受． 要求： 1． 词数：80 －100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2． 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名． As we all know， everyone has his unforgettable memories． I still remember the first time－－－－分析高分句型一 Then my father told me how to move， how to stretch out my hands and legs． 然后我父亲告诉我如何移动，如何伸展我的手和腿． how to move， how to stretch out my hands and legs 使用了疑问词+动词不定式 高分句型二 It took me about four hours to learn to swim． 我学游泳花了大约四个小时的时间．It takes sb some time to do sth．花某人 多长时间在某事． 解答As we all know， everyone has his unforgettable memories． I still remember the first time I learned to swim．（开篇点题）Last summer holiday， I wanted to learn how to swim．I asked my father to teach me． I went to the swimming pool with my father． He taught me how to swim．（爸爸教我游泳）At first，I was afraid of diving in the water．And I felt uncomfortable in the water． But my father always encouraged me．He said he would protect me．（我害怕，他鼓励我）Then I began to swim， but I couldnt swim forward at all． It made me upset． Then my father told me how to move， how to stretch out my hands and legs．高分句型一Slowly， I could move a little． It took me about four hours to learn to swim． 高分 句型二 I felt quite happy．（我学会了游泳） What an unforgettable experience it was!（感受） 点评在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开 和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提 纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．