人教版七年级上册英语Unit4

English Writing低年级写作训练I’m Kitty.Hello, everyone!Nice to meet you!Where is Kitty? the boxin the boxon the boxnext to the boxabove the bedunderWhat’s in the bedroom?There is….What’s +介词短语…?There is/are….My BedroomMy Bedroom要求： 仔细观察图片，以“My Bedroom”为题目写一篇短文，用 There be 句型描述图片中的物品，至少写出5句话。My BedroomShowing TimeMy BedroomThis is my bedroom. There is a bed in the bedroom. There is a sofa in the bedroom. There is also a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.My BedroomThis is my bedroom. There is a bed in the bedroom. There is a sofa in the bedroom. There is also a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:My BedroomThis is my bedroom.There is a bed in the bedroom. There is a sofa in the bedroom. There is also a table in the bedroom.There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:语言啰嗦There is a bed, a sofa and a tablein the bedroom.My BedroomThis is my bedroom.There isa bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom.There isa chair next to the table.There isa TV on the table.There aretwo pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:句式单一My BedroomThis is my bedroom.There isa bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom.There isa chair next to the table.There isa TV on the table.There aretwo pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:My BedroomThis is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom.There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:What’s next to the table? There is a chair.My BedroomThis is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom.What’s next to the table? There is a chair. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:We can divide分成the passage into three parts.How can we make the passage better and better?我们如何能使文章更好?BeginningBodyEndingThe structure of a good passage好文章的结构My BedroomThis is my bedroom.  There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom.What’s next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? It’s on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV.  I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:My BedroomThis is my bedroom.  There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom.What’s next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? It’s on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV.  I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:BeginningBodyEndingBeginningBodyEnding总领全文——引出话题分层描述——诠释主题总结全文——深化主题What function does each part have?文章各段的作用）2. We can write a better beginning.How can we make the passage better and better?我们如何能使文章更好?We can divide分成the passage into three parts.My BedroomThis is my bedroom.  There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom.What’s next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? It’s on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV.  I like my bedroom very much.1、Topic Sentence ——主题句法Two common kinds of beginning2、Ask a question ——提问式My BedroomDo you want to look at my bedroom? Please come to see it with me!Two common kinds of beginning2、Ask a question ——提问式Two common kinds of beginning1、Topic Sentence ——主题句法3. We can write a better ending.How can we make the passage better and better?我们如何能使文章更好?We can divide分成the passage into three parts.2. We can write a better beginning.My BedroomThis is my bedroom.  There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom.What’s next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? It’s on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV.  I like my bedroom very much.1、Topic Sente 学科网每份资料都启用了数字版权保护，仅限个人学习研究使用。任何分享、转载行为都会导致账号被封，情节严重者，追究法律责任！