英语十篇初三中考九年级英语作文包含解析

第一题 2016 答案 Good Ways to Keep Healthy It is very important for us to keep healthy. But doyou know the ways to keep us healthy? First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we caneat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we d better eat less meat.Different kinds of foods are necessary, it s also important to eat a balanceddiet. Then, playing sports every day can also help us keepfit. We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking abus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with ourfriends. We should try to do more exercise every day. Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we arelonely or unhappy, try to make friends, it is a good way to keep us happy. Ifyou smile often, you also feel happy. So, be happy to be healthy. 127words 解析 本题是围绕健康展开叙述，本题已经给出主要写作要点，写作中注意从三个方面进行论述。在写作时，本文的主语可以用第一，二人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。应该尽量包括文中提示的内容，可稍加拓展。内容上应注意描述的全面性，语言的表述应该符合语法的结 构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 第二题 假设你是李明，本周班会上， 你将代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次敬老院的公益活动。要点如下： 星期天早上 8：30 在校门口集合，乘公共汽车前往； 给老人们赠送班级礼物； 打扫卫生，整理房间； 唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、聊天，给老人们带去快乐； 活动很有意放，希望积极参与； 注意： 次数 60 80，书面表达的开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇： 1. chat v. 聊天 2. meaningful adj. 有意义的 3. cheer up 使 高兴 答案 We will pay a visit to the old people s home this Sunday. We llhave to meet at the school gate at 8:30 on Sunday morning and then go there bybus. There we will do some cleaning and tidy the rooms. After that we will havemany activities, such as singing, dancing, telling stories and chatting tocheer up the old. Before we leave, we ll give ourpresents to them. I hope all of us can take an active part. Through themeaningful activity, we can learn to care for the old. 解析 本题要求根据所给表格中所提供的信息，用英语写一个通知，将学生参加一次敬老院的公益活动的活动安排告知全班同学。本题给出大量的信息，包括活动时间、集合时间、出发时间以及返回时间；集合地点、活动地点；活动内容，及交通方式，注意将这些内容介绍清楚。写作中注意用词准确，逻辑清楚，并注意应用文题的格式，要求。 第三题 某中文网站提出 走路去上学 的倡议，请你就这一话题写一篇约 70 词的英语短文。内容提示：1. 走路有利于健康且安全； 2. 和同学结伴可以相互了解，相互帮助； 3. 不需要父母接送，学会自理； 4. 道路上车辆减少，城市不再拥堵； 要求：1. 要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 2. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名，否则不予评分。 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：be goodfor , each other , send , no longer, crowded Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise. 答案 Walking to school is a wonderfulway to exercise. I think it s good for health and it s safe. When we walk with ourclassmates, we can talk about something interesting and know each other better.Also, we can help each other.What smore，ifwe walk, our parents don t have to send us to school. We can learn to lookafter ourselves. As a result, there will be fewer cars in the city. Then thestreets are no longer crowded. I hope more and more students will go to schoolon foot. 解析 这是一篇给材料作文，写关于走路去上学的短语。本题所给材料较为详细，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。结合材料内容，可知本文主要用第一人称进行叙述，时态主要是一般现在时态。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上，为了让表达更符合逻辑，可以适当使用序数词；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。 第四题 三年快乐而充实的初中生活结束了，你将进入高中中职学校学习。展望未来，你对高中中职生活充满期待。请以 I Expect My SchoolLife 为题，写一篇 80 词左右的短文。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 要求：（ 1 ）内容要点： ① 生活、学习环境 餐厅，图书馆，运动场 ； ② 师生、同学关 系； ③生活多彩、学业进步；④补充一点自己的想法。 （2） 文章不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；要点齐全，语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范， 可以适当发挥。 （3） 提示词：get along with；colorfuladj.；knowledge；habit I Expect My School Life I will study in a high school soon. Everything is newto me. 答案 I Expect My School Life I will study in a high school soon. Everything is new tome. I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinningroom. And the library is full of different kinds of books. So I can read themin my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. I canhelp each other with my classmates. At the same time, I expect my school lifeis colorful, after class I can listen to music, play chess and basketball. Toget more useful knowledge or information, I can surf the Internet. I will keepa good eating habit. Do exercise often to stay in good spirits. Try my best tomake great progress. As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream. 解析 这是一篇给材料作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。写作中注意将以前的自己和现在的自己介绍清楚，并介绍一下自己的愿望。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，注意时态和主谓一致等问题。写作中注意使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 第五题 安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。 提示： 1. 体育锻炼 2. 上下楼梯 3. 交朋结友 4. 食品卫生 要求： 1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯； 2. 短文可以适当发挥；但要包含以上要点。 3. 词数：80 100 词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safeat school is especially important to us students. 答案 Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safeat school is especially important to us students. First, we should takecare not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There aretoo many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don t crowdwith each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may bean accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don tquarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthyfood and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health. In a word, its important to remember these for usall. 解析 这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提示，可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述，注意围绕要点组织材料，适当发挥。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。 2. 3.help parents do housework 3. 注意: 1.开头部分已写好,你只需接着写. 2. 所写内容必须包括表格中他们的想法和你的至 少三个想法. 3.词数:70 个左右. Should teenagers go out with their friends onweekends? Recently I vehad a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out withtheir friends on weekends. 答案 参考范文 Recently I ve had a discussion with my parents aboutwhether teenagers should go out with their friends on weekends.My parents thinkthat teenagers should stay at home to go 第六题 假如你叫李明,最近你和你父母就 周末学生该不该与同学外出活动 进行了讨论。 现在请你以 Shouldteenagers go out with their friends on weekends? 为题,参照表内所提供的信息,写一篇英语短文. Your parents ideas Your ideas 1. go over lessons 1. 2. have a good sleep over their lessons.And they shouldhave enough time to have a good sleep.In the meanwhile, they should help theirparents do some housework. In my opinion, we teenagers should go outwith our friends for fun so that we can relax more.And we can also share ideaswith each other.What s more ,we can also take some exercise together to keepfit. 解析 本题要求写一篇有关学生是否应该外出活动的议论文。要求中已经给出了父母们的观点，要求我 们给出自己的观点。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内容；分析内容要点，列出一些基 本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最 后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。 7 We need love. We also need to love. The person I lovemost is my mother. 答案 One Possible Version My mother 8 We need love. We also need to love. The person I lovemost is my mother. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 yearsold. She is of medium build with long black hair. Shi is quiet. She is ahistory teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook deliciousfood. She did a lot for me when I was a child. She boughtwhatever I needed for my study, even though she didn t have much money. Shesent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cookeddelicious and healthy food for me. When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my motherhappy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I ll save moneyand buy beautiful clothes that make her look still 第七题 母爱悄深，母爱无价;学会感恩，学会回报。某英语网站举办以 My mother 为题的英语征文 活动。请你根据下列思维导图提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事。 提示:1.短文应包括导图中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明; 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。 3.词数不少于 80，开头已给出:不计人总词数。 My mother young. I ll take her towonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when Ihave free time. That s what she wants most, I think. 解析 这是一篇给材料作文，短文的开头已经给出 . 本作文中给出的要点比较简略 , 动笔前先要围绕 这些要点阻止材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，不要偏离文章中心.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合文章要表达的主题, 不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。 第八题 假设你班为了配合创建 宜居城市 ，最近以 Life in the future ：for better or worse? 为题进行了一次讨论。许多同学对未来表示乐观，但也有一些同学对未来有些担心。请你根据下列 表格中的内容要点提示，用英语写一篇短文。 乐观者的观点 1. 世界变得更好 2. 生活水平提高 3. 人的寿命更长担心者的观点 1.世界变得更挤 one possible version： Life in the future：for better or worse? Many students are optimistic乐观的about the next fifty years．In fact，they think that the world will be a better place than itis now and our lives will be greatly improved．As a result，people willhave a higher standard of living and live longer．However，other students are worried about the future．They say the world will become more crowded． Therefore，we will haveeven more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available． But in my opinion，I think we will find ways to solve our problems andeveryone will live more happily． 2. 环境问题更多 3. 能源变得更少你自己的观点 考生自拟（至少两点） 注意： 1.词数 90 左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺; 3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇： 水平、标准 standard n.； 观点、看法 opinion Life in the future：for better orworse? Many students are optimistic乐观的about the next fifty years. 答案 解析 be good at running Tortoise win the third race swim across the river take turns to put on the back reach together What I have learned: 要求： 本文属于议论文，主体时态为一般现在时。写作时要用正确的句式表达出乐观者和担心者的 观点，最后用自己的观点结束全文。 第九题 假设你是江华，下周一你所在班级将举行英语课外阅读交流会。请根据以下提示，用英语写 一篇短文，向同学们介绍 The Famous Rabbit Tortoise Race 这一故事。 Rabbit win the second race 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并适当发挥； 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 词数：90 词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）。 We all know that the rabbit lost the first raceagainst the tortoise. 答案 We all know that the rabbit lost the first raceagainst the tortoise. After that the rabbit decided to have a second race. This time he didn t sleep andwon because he was good at running. However, the tortoise didn t give up. He had a thirdrace with the rabbit. There was a river on the way. The tortoise swam across it quickly and won. Thestory does not end here. In the last race they took turns to put each on the back and reachedthe finishing point together. From the story I have learned that with teamwork all of us can achievesuccess. 解析 本题要求介绍我们所熟悉的龟兔赛跑的故事，这是一个我们都很熟悉的故事，写作中注意将故事的内容介绍清楚，并介绍我们从中得到的教训。写作中注意叙述顺序，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。结合所给材料，可知本文主要记述的是过去发生的事情，故时态主要是一般过去时态。人称为第三人称。句子结构主要为系表结构，主谓宾结构。文中适当使用代词，注意避免句式的单调重复，避免单词及语法错误。 第十题 研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表提示内容，写一篇英语短文。 听音乐前的情绪状态适用音乐 听音乐后的心境 压力大，过分焦虑 流行音乐放松 沉迷电脑游戏，兴奋过度乡村音乐平静 困倦. 疲劳摇 滚 音 乐振奋 孤独.悲伤（考生自拟）（考生自拟） 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数； 2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点； 3. 条理清楚.语句连续； 4. 文中不得出现真实的地名.校名和人名等信息。 （参考词汇：摇滚音乐 rockmusic） Research has shown that music has an important effecton one s moods. 答案 One possible version: Research has shown that musichas an important effect on one s moods. So people use different kinds of musicto change moods. If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to popmusic. After you listen to it, you will feel relaxed. Some of the students arecrazy about computer games and feel over excited, they can listen to countrymusic. After listening to it, they will feel calm and peaceful. Some people feeltired and sleepy, they can listen to rock music. After they listen to it, theywill feel excited. Sometimes I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to discomusic, after I listen to it, I feel happy again. Music is so wonderful. I likeit very much. 解析 本题要求写一篇音乐的议论文。本题所给材料较为详细，故动笔前先要认真阅读材料，确定写作内容。写作中主要将各种情绪状态及适合的音乐介绍清楚。结合语境可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，人称问题较为复杂，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意表达的条理 性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。