高中英语作文审题技巧.doc

假如你叫李华，是一位高中生。随着科技的发展，iPod已成为中学生的新宠。用iPod既可听音乐、阅读纯文本电子书，又可玩电子游戏。请你用英语给某英语报社写一封信，谈谈中学生使用iPod的情况。信的内容须包括以下几点： 1. 使用iPod对学习的好处。2. 对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响。3. 提出自己的建议并说明理由。词数：120左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）Dear Editor, I’ m a senior high school student，named Li Hua. 参考范文Dear Editor，I’ m a senior high school student，named Li Hua. Now many students have iPods and think it’s a fashion to use them. Using an iPod, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, it is helpful to our study, especially to our English listening. Some students, however, bring their iPods to classroom and listen to music with earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games. In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPods to help achieve academic success. Classroom is a place for students to study, and therefore concentration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPods in a proper way. （2012·四川卷） 假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初,你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1.对英语学习的认识;2.自己目前的英语水平;3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题;4.对英语教学的两点建议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.信的开头和结尾已给出。Dear Ms Li,I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.?[来源:学§科§网]Thank you!Li Hua思路点拨1.审题:文体:应用文——书信时态:一般现在时人称:第一人称2.要点:1对英语学习的认识2自己目前的英语水平3自己英语学习中存在的主要问题4对英语教学的两点建议3.参考词汇和句式:1 play an important role/part in2 It’s necessary for...to do3 It’s difficult/hard for...to 4 make great progress参考范文Dear Ms Li, I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher. As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English.I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help. Thank you!Li Hua 2012·天津卷假设你是李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校。他热爱中国文化,特别是戏曲文化。8月5日下午2:00在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英台》。请你根据以下提示,用英语给Chris写一封电子邮件,邀请他一起观看演出。☆提出邀请并简述原因;☆提出观剧后活动建议如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等;☆请求对方回复。1.请使用规范英语,词数不少于100;2.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:越剧Shaoxing Opera《梁山伯与祝英台》Butterfly Lovers天津大剧院Tianjin Grand TheaterDear Chris,I have good news to tell you.?Yours,Li Jin思路点拨1本题是一封电子邮件,所以用第一人称。由于是计划去看越剧,观剧后还有一些活动,因此以一般将来时为主,同时结合一般现在时。2要包含提示要点①介绍越剧上演的时间和地点②提出邀请,简述原因③观剧后的活动建议④请求对方回复。3内容要点: 邀请你去invite you to...上演put on[来源:Zxxk.Com]喜欢be fond of/have an appetite for参考范文Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you. I’d like to invite you to see Butterfly Lovers, a famous Chinese Shaoxing Opera, which is to be put on at the newly built Tianjin Grand Theater at 2:00 p.m. on August 5th. As you know, as your close friend, I know you are fond of Chinese culture, especially opera culture.Of course, besides going to the theater, we can do some other meaningful things, such as visiting the museum or the art gallery nearby, which both contain a lot of items of great value. I’m sure that we will have a good time.I’m looking forward to receiving your reply.Best wishes.三、图表作文（2012?江苏卷）生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文, 向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。简要描述事情的经过打篮球、碰撞、争执,等等分析发生冲突的原因1. 遇事不够冷静 2. ……谈谈避免冲突的做法请考生根据自己的经历或感想,提出至少两种做法1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2.词数150 左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.思路点拨1本题为半开放作文,要求学生介绍事情经过、冲突原因以及避免冲突的做法。在写作中,学生首先应该注意时态的变化。在叙述事情的经过以及冲突原因时应该使用过去时,在谈及避免冲突的做法时应该使用一般现在时。2学生还应注意段落清晰,行文流畅。根据要点提示,作文最好分为三段,第一段介绍事情经过,第二段分析冲突原因,第三段谈论避免冲突的做法,提出建议。3内容要点:碰撞bump into 争执quarrel 关系紧张tense relationship 过错fault 该受到责备be to blame 过分关注输赢care too much about winning and losing 避免冲突avoid conflicts 设身处地为他人着想put ourselves in others place 参考范文Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.To be honest, it was Su’s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others place. Don’t be self centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.（2012?浙江卷）你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句quote并相互交流,以下是某同学摘录的句子:“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you”。请按下列要求用英语写一篇100 120个词的短文:1.针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；2.举例说明理由。注意:短文的开头已给出不计词数。In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”参考范文In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.” I can’t agree more with this view. It’s true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.Take Abraham Lincoln, for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.思路点拨1.仔细审题:1文体:议论文2时态:以一般现在时为主。3人称:第一人称为主。4段落:可分两段或三段①两段:第一段:陈述观点；第二段,举例说明理由②三段:第一段:陈述观点；第二段,举例说明理由；第三段:总结2.归纳要点:1你对于名言“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you”的看法。2举出一些例子来说明你的理由。注意事项:1从话题看,该题符合考生的认知发展水平。考生可以联系熟悉的事例。2要写好这篇短文,需要考生有评判性思维能力,用事实论证观点。3.参考词汇:1 be in favor of; I can’t agree more; I think it is reasonable; It’s true that...2 take sth./ sb. for example...;for instance/example; we can learn from...3 in a word, in one word, in brief, therefore... （2012?山东卷） 假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上,介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文:1.参加英语角的益处;2.坚持写英语日记的作用;3.英文阅读网站EnjoyReading对你的帮助。注意:1.词数:120 150; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。思路点拨1.本文要求以李华的名义写一篇文章来介绍一下课外学习英语的经验,所以文章的题材应属于介绍经验类文章。时态应以一般现在时为主。2.写作时应列举出参加的三个主要活动及益处,保证要点全面,并尽量使用所积累的高级词汇,如participate in, take part in, manage to do, in addition, what’s more等。3.注意文章结构的合理及层次的清晰,不是简单罗列汉语部分的信息,而应做到层次清晰并有一定的逻辑性,并可适当扩充,使文章内容更丰富。4.要应用常用句型,如定语从句及强调句等。参考范文 My name is Li Hua. I feel honoured to have the chance to share my out of class English learning experience with you. First of all, I often participate in English Corner, where I can talk and communicate with students and foreign teachers. Not only can I improve my oral English but also I learn some customs in western countries. Secondly, I insist on keeping a diary, which can improve my ability of expressing myself in English and help me to put what I’ve learnt to use. In addition, I often surf the Internet and browse Enjoy Reading, which enlarges my vocabulary and helps to improve my reading speed and my reading comprehension ability. Furthermore, it opens a window for me to see the world. It’s because of this and my effort in class that I managed to get the first place in the English Contest held recently in our school. I hope my experience will be of some help to you and I also wish for your advice.（2012·辽宁卷）假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信,表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法,内容主要包括:优点:1.话题广泛;2.图片丰富;3.有助于提高学习兴趣。建议:适当降低词汇难度。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。One Possible VersionDear Editor,As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What’s more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, I’d like to suggest changing them into easier ones.Best regards, Li Hua思路点拨1本文是一篇提纲式作文,该书面表达为应用文中的书信写作,属传统的指导性写作。写好此文,需注意以下几点:一是时态把握要准确。文章基本时态为一般现在时,同时兼顾其他的时态。二是要点要齐全,且详略得当。题目已给出了较为详尽的写作要求,要点作出了明确的规定,这些要点不能有遗漏。写作重点可放在对于教材优点的介绍上面。三是切忌照译,要适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,使行文连贯流畅。2通过审题,归纳出本文内容要点如下:①肯定现行教材;②赞赏教材的三点优点;③一点建议。这三点为基本点,缺一不可。3内容要点:话题广泛a variety of topics受欢迎be popular with过去常常used to do建议做某事suggest doing sth. （2012·成都模拟）随着英语和网络的普及，一些英语词汇被夹杂在汉语表达中, 如用hold表示“能对付、扛得住”, 用out表示“过时、陈旧”。请针对该现象，根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。1. 该现象积极和消极的方面; 2. 该现象背后反映了什么；3. 你是否接受这种表达及理由。注意: 1. 词数：120词左右2. 生词：phenomenon [C]现象 参考范文With the popularity of English and the Internet, some people like to use English words in Chinese expressions. For example, they use the word “hold” to mean “to control or be able to deal with”, and “out” to mean “out of date, not fashionable”. As we all know, every coin has two sides, and the positive side of this phenomenon is that much fun can be felt sometimes when English words are directly put in Chinese expressions. However, this phenomenon also has a negative effect on the proper use of standard Chinese. It shows that the western culture is gradually influencing our life. Personally, I don’t appreciate this fashion because keeping Chinese pure is beyond any fashion.