英语七年级上册第七单元作文指导

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点评：1，开篇的Hi, everyone!直接如题，一下子拉近了与读者的距离

2，语言流畅，有逻辑。所给的提示内容能清晰无误地表达出来。

3，For boys, we have T shirts in black and white for only ￥60.词句的熟练运用，可见作者的语言知识很扎实。

4，最后一句祈使句Come to Mi Fan Clothes Store now!的使用，加大了广告的感染力。