常见英语作文错误精选范文.doc

常见英语作文错误 精选范文英语写作练习中的错误 英语写作练习中的错误大致可分为语言思维方面的错误、语法错误、用词错误、搭配错误、标点符号错误等。 英汉句子结构大体相同，即都是主谓宾顺序，但英语和汉语的主语概念有很大差异。英语句子非常明确主谓之间的施动与受动的关系。主语要么施动，用主动语态；要么施动，用被动语态。而汉语不一样，汉语句子的主谓关系主要表示主题与评论的关系。 W: The ability to speak English, I think I am the best in our class. R: I think I am the best when it comes to the ability to speak English. 我觉得研究生的学习很忙。 W: I feel the study of graduate is very busy R: I feel very busy with the study of the graduate courses. 你的工作忙吗？ W: Is your work busy? R:Are you busy with your work? 她的英语说得好。 W: Her English speaks good. R: She speaks good/fluent English. / She speaks English with fluency. 那里在举行英语晚会。 W: There was holding an English party there. R: They were holding an English party there. R: There was an English party there. 他带的手表是金子做的。 W: He wears a watch is made of gold. R: The watch he wears is made of gold. W: You shouldn’t disappoint R: You shouldn’t be disappointed 我希望多学到一些知识。 W: I wish to study more knowledge R: I wish to acquire/obtain/gain more knowledge. 他教给我们许多知识。 W: He has taught us a lot of knowledge. R: He has taught us a lot of things. R: He has imparted a lot of knowledge to us. W: Nowadays, the traffic in big cities is getting more and more crowded. R: Nowadays, the traffic in big cities is getting heavier and heavier. W: Fresh air can keep people health. R: Fresh air can keep people healthy. W: He likes playing basketball, football, table tennis. R: He likes playing basketball, football and table tennis W: Only I have a good base I can do everything well in future. R: Only when I have a good base can I do everything well in future. W: Because I like fresh air, so I live in the countryside. R: Because I like fresh air, I live in the countryside. W: I was reading a magazine, my classmate was talking. R: I was reading a magazine and my classmate was talking. W: He speaks several foreign languages, such as English、French、German、Spanish。 R: He speaks several foreign languages, such as English, French, German and Spanish. W: The novel《Pride and Prejudice》is very interesting. R: The novel “Pride and Prejudice” is very interesting. W: People try to resist the influence of TV commercials, is often useless. R: People try to resist the influence of TV commercials, but W: TV has informative, educational function, and it is very entertaining. R: TV has informative, educational and entertaining function. W: There are many ways to improve city traffic. For example, widening streets, building subways and so on. R: There are many ways to improve city traffic, for example, widening streets, building subways and so on. R: There are many ways to improve city traffic. For example, we can widen streets and build subways. W: There are many ways to improve city traffic. Such as, widening streets, building subways and so on. R: There are many ways to improve city traffic, such as widening streets and building subways. 下面我们对一些在英语写作中典型的病句实例逐一加以剖析． 一． 不一致（Disagreements） 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致 时态不一致及代词不一 致等． 例１． When one have money ,he can do what he want to . 人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么． 剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致． 改为： Once one has money ,he can do what he wants to do 二． 修饰语错位（Misplaced Modifiers） 英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化．对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重 视，因而造成了不必要的误解．例１． I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus. 剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末． 三． 句子不完整（Sentence Fragments） 在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生． 例１． There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on . 剖析：本句后半部分”for example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句． 改为：There are many ways to know society ,for example ,by TV ,radio ,and newspaper. 四． 悬垂修饰语（Dangling Modifiers） 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清．例如：At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中”at the age of ten”只点出十岁时，但没有说明” 谁”十岁时．按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了． When I was ten, my grandfather died. 例１． To do well in college, good grades are essential. 剖析：句中不定式短语 “to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚． To do well in college, a student needs good grades. 五． 词性误用Misuse of Parts of Speech “词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等． 例１． None can negative the importance of money. 剖析：negative 系形容词，误作动词。 None can deny the importance of money. 六． 指代不清Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns 指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句： Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid. 玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。 读完上面这一句话，读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确，意思就一目了然了。这个句子可改为： Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid. 例1. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself. 剖析：句中人称代词we 和反身代词yourself指代不一致。改为： We can also know society by serving it ourselves. 七． 不间断句子Run on Sentences 什么叫run on sentence?请看下面的例句。 例１． There are many ways we get to know the outside world. 剖析：这个句子包含了两层完整的意思：“There are many ways.” 以及“We get to know the outside world.”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。 There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或： There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world 八． 措词毛病Troubles in Diction Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题，囿于教学时间紧迫，教师平时在这方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。 例１． The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution. 农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。 剖析：显然，考生把obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use 不断增加的使用” 应改为“abusive use 滥用”。 The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution. 九． 累赘Redundancy 言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词；写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组；能用词组的不用从句或句子。如： In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him. 本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句，我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”可以改为：In spite of his laziness, I like him. 例１． For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need. 剖析：整个句子可以大大简化。 Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need. 十． 不连贯Incoherence 不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。 例１． The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth. 剖析：The fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。It 与things 在数方面不一致。 Fresh water is the most important thing in the world. 十一． 综合性语言错误Comprehensive Misusage 所谓“综合性语言错误”，是指除了上述十种错误以外，还有诸如时态，语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误。 例1．Today, Money to everybody is very importance, our’s eat, cloth, live, go It Pays to be Honest 1. Did this not only has deceived teacher, was has deceived own. 2. With society抯 development all appeared the partial people dishonest phenomenon in each aspect. 3. The people of not honest may cheat themselves and it makes the result is very bad of serious. 4. When we were very young, we have known that we should have to be honest 5. Many public officials often skullduggery in order to be commend. 6. And many corporation makes sham product to deceive our consumer. 7. If lost honesty, we community will back up. 8. Many students stole a look at others?papers. Even that they let sb. take place of themselves. We must recognize that it抯 very foolish thing. It hurts not only others but also yourself. 9. Those who gain fortunes, not by hard labor, they are dishonest and their reputation will become poor. 10. Nowadays, a large amount of people think the say 搃t pays to be honest?was out of date. 11. Finally, they will be punished for their dishonest. 12. People in contact with people is honestly. 13. At present society have many phenomenon of unhonest. 14. But in the past 20 years of my life, I found many dishonest phenomenon. 15. 卆nd they will must get an evil consequence.. 16. honest benefits ourself and benefits themselves. 17. Honest is a kind of virtue. 18. Now in society, products become more and more, and the advertisements which introduced them are also become more and more. 19. When I was being a child, my parents teach me to be a honest child. 20. Honesty is a good custom. 21. People are willing to associate with a honest man. 22. If everybody are honest, we can trust all words and abandon the suspicious and jealous. 23. If everybody like this, we can抰 imagine how will the society into being. 24. They lack of honesty. 25. Fake goods damaged to people抯 health. 26. Parents educated us that a person should honest since we is still a baby, because honest is a virtue, but the dishonest抯 phenomenon is still exist in the society. 27. If a person is honest. He will be welcomed with others. Others will be willing to associate with him. 28. As a person who should be honest. 29. As we all known, it pays to be honest. 30. In my opinion, the honest is very important. When I was a children, my father was told me will be a honest man 31. In fact, if a man doesn抰 have honest, it抯 bad for him or her. 32. Friendship base on the honest 33. Please treat others what you want to be treated 34. Honest is benefit for everyone. 35. If he tell the truth, he will be scold. 36. As a college student honesty means a lot of things to me. 37. People be dishonest for many reasons 38. Certainly, there are still many people keep to be honest. 39. As far as I concerned, honest is a essential human character. 40. Being honest one can get what he want. 41. People look down upon those who always telling lies. 42. In the other way相反地, those who are not honest are unbelieved by people. Corrections: 1. Doing this / This act has deceived the teacher and the student himself OR: Doing this / This act has not only deceived the teacher but also fooled the the student himself 2. With the development of society, some people are becoming dishonest. / With the development of society, there appear phenomena of some people being dishonest. 3. Dishonest people may cheat themselves and this will have a bad result / consequence. 4. When we were very young, we knew that we should be /were supposed to be honest. 5. Many public officials often cheat in order to get commended. 6. And many corporations make sham to deceive 7. If we have lost honesty, our community will lag behind. /Without honesty, our community will lag behind. 8. Many students stole a look at others?papers. They even let somebody take their place. We must realize that these behaviors are very foolish and will hurt others as well as the students themselves. 9. Those who gain fortunes by unjust/fraudulent means rather than by hard labor are dishonest dishonest and their reputation will become poor. 10. Nowadays, a large number of people think the saying 搃t pays to be honest?is out of date. 11. Eentually/Sooner or later, they will be punished for their dishonesty 12. People should act honestly when in contact with others. 13. At present there are many phenomena of dishonesty in our society. 14. But in the past 20 years of my life, I have found many dishonest phenomena. 15. 卆nd they will surely get an evil consequence. 16. Being honest benefits not only us and but also others. 17. Honesty is a kind of virtue 18. Now in society, products are becoming more and more, and there is corresponding increase of the advertisements of the products. 19. When I was a child, my parents taught me to be an honest child. 20. Honesty is a good virtue. 21. People are willing to keep in contact with an honest person. 22. If everybody is honest, we can trust all words and abandon suspicion and jealousyBetter: If everybody are honest, there will be trust between people and suspicion and jealousy will disappear. 23. If everybody is like this, we can抰 imagine how the society will become 24. They lack honesty. 25. 抯 health. 卛s harmful to? 26. Parents educated us to be honest since we were babies, because honesty is a virtue. Unfortunately, the phenomenon of dishonesty still exists in the society. 27. If a person is honest, he will be popular with / 厀ill be welcomed by others. Others will be willing to associate with him. 28. A person should be honest. As a student, I should be honesty. 29. As we all know, it pays to be honest. 30. In my opinion, honesty is very important. When I was a child, my father told /taught me to be an honest man. 31. In fact, if a man isn抰 honest / doesn抰 have honesty, it抯 bad for him. 32. Friendship is based on honesty. 33. Please treat others as you want to be treated. 34. Honesty is beneficial to everyone 35. If he tells the truth about something, he will be scolded. 36. As a college student, I know the importance of being honest. / Honesty means a lot of things to a college student like me. 37. 38. Certainly, there are still many people keeping honest. 39. As far as I am concerned, honesty is an essential human character 40. Being honest one can get what he wants 41. People look down upon those who are always telling lies. 42. On the other hand / In contrast相反地, those who are not honest are disbelieved by people. 写得比较好的作文： 1． 朱琳11 分（批改后的范文） It Pays to be Honest Honesty is one of the most important qualities of a person. When we were young, we were taught to be honest by our parents. As we grow up, we realize that our society needs honest persons. If we want to enjoy high reputation and gain great success, honesty is the best policy. As society advances, more and more people pay great attention to making a large fortune. As a result, they neglect honesty, which had a very bad effect on every one of us. Some people cheat their friends, workmates,even their parents in order to get greater profits. They don抰 realize that what they have lost is much more than what they have gained. The farther honesty is away from them, the more serious result there will be. Without honesty, nothing can be done. Honesty is the base of everything.. If we want to do something successful, the main factor contributing to our victory all our lives will be none other than honesty. 2． 贝雯卿 11分 It Pays to be Honest With the development of socialist economy, the quality of people’s life in our country has been greatly improved. Unfortunately, we are faced with a new terrible problem ?dishonesty. The English proverb says, 揌onesty is the best policy? But in order to make larger fortune, more and more people tend to neglect this quality. For example, some businessman have often been blinded by money, as a result, they cheated the custom