假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只允许修改10处，多者从第11处起不计分。

During the last Spring Festival, I get lots of money by snatching抢the red envelope through WeChat. But nowI am losing in thought whether it really does good to people, especial youngchildren, since the smartphone is now so popular. From his point of view, it willdo more harms than good to young children unless they are addicted to snatchingthe red envelope. On the one hand, they will think its such easy to get much money.Just by snatching they can get it. On other hand, spending too much time on thethings that they have nothing to do with their studies will never benefit them.Its bad for either young peoples mental health but physical health.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单间的增加 删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧ 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处 多者从第11处起不计分。Dear Li Hua I am honored that you would ask me for some advices. As you know our band was formed in a very unusual way. However we learned a lot about be a band since then. First you should think careful about what kind of music you want to write and play. You had better play one kind of music if you want to become famous. Next you can come up to a name for your band—something which is different. Then make a special time for practicing but stick to it. I will also need to give several performances for friends and family to get their ideas on your musical ability. Above all just have a fun. I believe it will be an amazed experience for you.Yours Sincerely Freddy