假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌的以下作文 文中共有10 

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线 划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2.只允许修改10处，多者从第11处起 不计分。

This afternoon, our class invited an old craftsman teach us about Chinese papercut art.

On arriving at our classroom, he was given a warmly welcome. First of all, he told us that Chinese papercut is a traditional art form or it’s a kind of folk culture with the long history. Then, he showed us that the basic steps and skills of papercut. We all listened and watched attentive. After that, we began to create their own works. The old craftsman walked around us, guiding us patiently. Finally, he praised the students who do well. Admiring our works, we were all very exciting. We learned a lot from this activity. I hope we can have more activity of this kind in the future.

答案及解析: 知识点：短文改错

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Chinese papercut is a traditional art form or it’s a kind of folk culture with the long history. Then,

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he showed us that the basic steps and skills of papercut. We all listened and watched attentive.

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After that, we began to create their own works. The old craftsman walked around us, guiding us

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假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌的以下作文 文中共有10 处语言错