高考英语作文提分技能
如何让作文快速变成高级句型?
如何修改一二个单词就成为高级句子?
如何让一个平庸的句子变成闪光夺目的好句子?
用了接下来的方法,判卷老师忍不住都要打高分。
今天给大家分享升级技巧:中间变。
1、good ---- beneficial / excellent / terrific
例如:It is a good activity.
升级后:It is a terrific activity.
2、bad ---- terrible/ awful /heartbreaking
例如:The weather is so bad.
升级后:The weather is so heartbreaking. 天气是如此的令人心碎
3、like ---- prefer/appreciate/be crazy about
例如:I like your sense of responsibility.
升级后:I appreciate your sense of responsibility.
4、should ---- be supposed to
例如:we should protect the environment.
升级后:we are supposed to protect the environment.
5、think ---- hold the view that
例如:I think he is a good teacher.
升级后:I hold the view that he is a terrific teacher.
6、beautiful ---- of beauty
例如:She is a beautiful girl.
升级后:She is a girl of beauty.
7、we ---- we teenagers
例如:we should learn English well.
升级后:we teenagers are supposed to learn English well.
8、very ---- extremely
例如:My English teacher is very good .
升级后:My English teacher is extremely excellent .
9、happy ---- joyful / delighted
例如:I am so happy about it .
升级后:I am extremely delighted about it.
10、want to do sth ---- tend/intend to do sth
例如:I want to make a plan about my birthday .
升级后:I intend to make a plan about my birthday .
通过以上我们可以轻松学会作文的基本升级技巧,从普通分变成高分。其实任何一句话都可以用这三种升级方式来升级。我们再重温一下我们的升级技巧,
前面增,中间变,后面补.
前面增:
1、Nothing is more important than the fact that…没有什么比这更重要的是…
2、It is beyond doubt that ... 毫无疑问...
3、There is no denying the fact that 不可否认...
4、It goes without saying that… 不言而喻,…
5、It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说……
后面补:
,from which we can acquire more knowledge and skills. 从这件事中我们可以获取更多的知识和技能
,which can promote life quality and a sense of happiness . 这件事可以促进生活的质量和幸福感
,which is both meaningful and memorable. 这件事既有意义又值得回忆
,which can cultivate our interests and broaden our views
高级过渡词:
首先:To begin with,=To start with,=First of all,
其次:Furthermore, = Moreover,=In addition,=What’s more,
最后:In conclusion, =Above all , =Eventually,
练习:写一下你喜欢的英语老师,并说一下原因。
复杂思路:我很喜欢我们的英语老师,第一,他有精湛的教学技艺,知识渊博,上知天文下知地理。第二,他是一个不求回报又热心的老师,春蚕到死丝方尽,蜡炬成灰泪始干。第三,老师在英语岗位上深耕几十载,桃李满天下。
(同学们不妨思考一下,上面这几句话真得都能翻译出来并且不出错吗?)
(所以我们需要简化,越简单越好)
简单思路:我很喜欢我们的英语老师,第一,他知道的多。第二,他人好。第三,我们都喜欢他。
对应英文:I like our English teacher .Firstly, he knows a lot.Secondly,he is very kind. Thirdly, we all like him .
我们进行逐句升级:
I like our English teacher (未升级)
There is no denying the fact that I prefer our English teacher.(升级后)
Firstly,(未升级)
To begin with,(升级后)
he knows a lot.(未升级)
he knows a lot,which can cultivate our interests and broaden our views.(升级后)
Secondly,(未升级)
Furthermore,(升级后)
he is very kind.(未升级)
he is extremely kind.(升级后)
Thirdly,(未升级)
Eventually,(升级后)
we all like him .(未升级)
we teenagers are crazy about him,from whom we can acquire more knowledge and skills.(升级后)
最终版:
There is no denying the fact that I prefer our English teacher.To begin with,he knows a lot,which can cultivate our interests and broaden our views.Furthermore,he is extremely kind.Eventually,we teenagers are crazy about him,from whom we can acquire more knowledge and skills.
同学们升级完是不是一下子焕然一新啊,从屌丝瞬间变成高富帅。所以要好好掌握。
同学们把我讲的内容认真看3遍你就会真正的理解这种方法的实用性!
下期我将继续个大家分享一下高级猛烈的句型,喜欢的同学要关注和点赞哦。