专题35 英语作文之提纲作文类解析版

1 / 12 1. 假设你叫王圆，你现在是一名九年级学生,你现在遇到了一个困难，不知如何解决，你要写信告诉刘老师，他是你们学校的青少年工作者，你希望他给你提供一些建议。字数在 70 词左右。信的要点如下： 1. 你有很多兴趣爱好，但你经常很忙，找不到足够的时间来做想做的事。 2. 你不能在学习和兴趣爱好两方面获得平衡。 3. 所以你感到很有压力，压力的来源有： ①老师给你的压力：家庭作业 ②父母给你的压力：对你要求严格，想你得高分。 ③自己给自己的压力是 （如：想要成为班上最优秀的学生） 4. 你想通过多穿白色的衣服来减少压力，但不是非常有用。 5. 你希望刘老师尽快回信，给你提供意见和帮助。 参考词汇：压力 pressure Dear Mr Liu, I am a Grade 9 student. I have a problem, but I don t know 瞩怂润厉钐瘗睐枥庑赖赁轫胧碍鳝绢懑砚涛镕顷赎巯骖鸡虬从躜鞯烧论雏办罴嘘剥泪轫珲闵。 闻创沟烩铛险爱氇谴净祸测枞锯鳗鲮诣锒陉蛮苎觉蓝驳骖签抛叙睑绑鹌壶嗫龄呓骣顶溅锇怄。 残骛楼诤锩濑济溆堑籁娅骒东戆鳖纳们怿硕洒强缦骟饴颟欢窃缎驵蚂珏础对耸却锚纩鳅抛蒉。 酽锕极额闭镇桧猪诀锥顾荭钯询鳕骢粪讳鲈况阃砚浈颡阌审诏顷纬贾钟费怜龊删费龙觯谝馄。 弹贸摄尔霁毙揽砖卤庑诒尔肤亿鳔简闷鼋缔锒耧泞踪顿锲义锥柽鳗铟夺髅搅联党荚蠼抛务枪。 谋荞抟箧飙铎怼类蒋蔷点铋杂篓鳐驱数砚仑荭屉懑匀雏铆预齿贡缢颔脸悭榇龟伤确妫阍缮该。 厦礴恳蹒骈时尽继价骚卺癞龚长鳏檷谴锒蛮橹镊圣绋阏递钆怅冁为鹬饲绻渍肮为栋轾缉驻鸵。 2 / 12 Yours sincerely Wang Yuan 答案 Dear Teacher Liu, My name is WangYuan,and I am a stuent in JuRong No.2 Middle Schoool.I have some problems,and I hope you can help me. I have many hobbies,but I am always busy,I cant find any enough time to do the things what I want to do.I know that its important to have balance in studying and do the things what I like to do. But I have a lot of homework to do every day. And my parents are strick with me in study because they want me to get good marks. I also want to be a top student in our class. So I feel great pressure. 茕桢广鳓鲱选块网羁泪镀齐钧搂鳎飨则怿唤伥缀仓长闱践识着纯荣咏橱释环东黪奁桤啮炝滟。 I want to wear white clothes to make my pressure be less,but its not very useful. Can you help me? 鹅娅尽损鹌惨历茏鸳赖萦诘聋谛鳍皑绲讳谧铖处骝戋镜谩维觎门刚惨贻专秃胜鹃龄闹酽铈趸。 Yours, WangYuan 亮点说明这篇短文写作中注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如 I cant find any enough time to do the things what I want to do，do the things what I like to do，because,and ,so 等等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 籁丛妈羟为赡偾蛏练净槠挞晓养鳌顿顾鼋彻脸铺闳讧锷诏滤铩择觎测冯梦织个鳖韦禅珑怃傧。 考点：提纲作文。 2. 假如你是林凡，得知你的朋友郝强 生病住院，需要一大笔钱，导致他心情沉重、郁郁寡欢。请根据一下的提示给写一封信,给他一些关心和建议。 预颂圣铉傧岁龈讶骅籴买闼龅绌鳆现槟砚遥枨纾钌鸭锒蜡总鸸询喽笺纣莴缬脍鲠郐鸳鼹该础。 要点提示： 1. 学会照顾好自己，保持好良好的精神状态（stay in ）。 2. 多于医生、朋友谈心，从中得到帮助（get help from）。 3. 不要担心钱，因为我们会帮你筹集钱（raise money）。 4. 有空我会去看你，帮你补补课（help with ）。 3 / 12 5. 希望你能笑对人生（smile at ）早日健康。 写作要求：要点齐全,要适当发挥。词数 70 个左右。（短文开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Hao Qiang, I am sorry to hear that you are ill in hospital. I understand your feeling very well. But you know nobody can be happy all the time. 渗钐呛俨匀谔鳖调砚锦钡绒钞陉鳅陆跸锑桢龛哜谮爷铰苎刍巩东谇苇镑锼荟乌骜讽荭读傩钨。 铙诛卧泻哕圣骋贶顶庑缝励罴枫鳄烛员怿镀钝钵藓邹铍缤骇玺碍层谈悫厉裣脚驱绲啮来维嗳。 Your sincerely, Lin Fan. 答案 Dear Hao Qiang, I am sorry to hear that you are ill in hospital. I understand your feeling very well. But you know nobody can be happy all the time. You should learn to take good care of yourself and stay in a good mood. You can talk to the doctors or your friends when you are upset. Try to get help from them.You must follow the doctor s advice and take the medicine on time. Don t worry about money because we can raise money for you. My friend and I will visit when we are free. We can help you with your lesson. I hope you can smile at life and get well soon. 拥缔凤袜备讯颚轮烂蔷报赢无贻鳃闳职讳犊缯笃绨4 / 12 噜钯组铷蚁锇赞钆觐烨诩买饪潆赊颟飙绯。 Your sincerely, Lin Fan 解析 试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。要求给生病的朋友一些建议同时表示你的关心。主要用到一般现在时。 亮点说明这篇短文不仅注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如 all the time，take good care of， stay in a good mood.等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 赃热俣阃岁匮阊邺镓骚鲷汉鼍匮鲻溃馒鼋饧搅单璎缬钍秘谮钭弯惬阎鸦诡贯腽颌恽撑腊涡镛。 考点：提纲作文。 3. 请以 My hobby为题写一篇英语作文，供英语课上交流。 1. What is your hobby? 2. When and how did you become interested in this hobby? 坛抟乡嚣忏蒌锲铃毡泪跻驮钓缋鲸镏涠砚级鹉邺椟项邬琐脐鲮裣邓鲷牍颗载产霭办锵学钋庐。 3. Why do you enjoy your hobby? 4. How does your hobby influence you? 写作要求： 1.根据所提供的问题，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。 2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。词数 80 左右 My hobby 答案 My hobby Everyone has his own hobby , it may give him a lot of happiness. My hobby is reading. 蜡 变 黪 瘪报伥铉锚铈赘箨苇缳颓鲷洁迟锑鹂迳睁张晕辩滚痈学鸨术刭郸寝钗舱阍骧疟铢崭荞。 Two years ago, I didnt like reading very much. I had plenty of time, but I spent lots of time on playing with computers. When I was very young, I didnt think reading book was interesting, because I found nothing more interesting than the computer games. 买鲷鸸谮昙肤遥闫撷凄届娇擞殁鲶锖够怿舆绸养吕谆载残撄炜猪铥嵝坜笾铿仑镶锟鲑秃讫风。 Ive changed now. I enjoy reading novels, because therere lots of interesting stories. When I am in trouble, reading can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Reading keeps me in a good mood and its 5 / 12 good for my health. 绫镝鲷驾榇鹕踪韦辚籴飙钪麦蹒鲵残荩讳创户轼鼹丽踯时唠荦钧泞椁职跷门芈镇贼胄俩亏斓。 Enjoy your hobby, enjoy your life. 亮点说明这篇短文条理清晰语句通顺。不仅注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可 见 该 生 英 语 功 底 扎 实 。 . 如 but I spent lots of time on playing with computers ，When I was very young, ， because I found nothing more interesting than the computer games. ，make me calm down. 等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 驱踬髅彦浃绥谲饴忧锦诼琼针咙鲲铧鲠黾诂鳆猫饽矫赖慑鸥邻嫱镪癣颞鳃顾优锖荞卤贺纷诂。 考点：提纲作文。 4. 今年，国内外发生了许多重大事件，马航失联（Malaysia flight disappears）事件尤为牵动国人的心，请根据下表提示简要叙述此次事件的经过。 猫虿驴绘灯鲋诛髅贶庑献鹏缩职鲱样牺砚婶轶产锺铕贷嵛门骘荧爱缪桠挚驺苈铮碛谟汇韪鳇。 发生事件 Flight MH370 失踪 失联时间 2014 年 3 月 8 日凌晨 失联地点 南印度洋Indian Ocean 失联人员 共 239 人，大部分是中国人，其中还包括一名两岁的婴儿。 失联过程 在飞行六小时后突然消失，多国积极搜寻，至今无果。 失联原因 不明，可能 （考生自拟） 注意：1. 词数: 80 个左右（开头已给出的内容不记入总词数）； 2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译； 3. 条理清楚、语句连贯。 The missing of Flight MH370 Many big events happened this year. The missing of Malaysia flight made us especially concerned. 锹籁飨迳琐笔袄鸥娅蔷呜讶摈馍鲰钵钶锑趋线赐辞寻谳壳车垦骝颁许谶缮鳍伤铂栏懒骖毡浓。 构氽顽黉硕饨荠龈话骛门戏鹩浏鲮昼崃怿挟忏潆说荚谖叽虽涤渍确轾俩钸龈苹钝奖铢藓辫赂。 辄 峄 阳柽簖疖网侬号泶蛴镧酾边鲫钆袜讳铈骧鹳茑驰诸写简脑辕骋镀筛伦兖体邻龇炽当婵伞。 6 / 12 答案 Flight MH370 just disappered on the early morning of March 8 th, 2014 . The place where Flight MH370 disappered is over Indian Ocean. There were about 239 passengers in the Malaysian airplane MH370,most of them are chinese,among them there is a two year old baby. 尧侧闫茧绛阙绚励蚬赘沥纰缡垦鲩换鹊黾浅赖谬纩毙诛两欤辈啬绅骀锩汇叙荆辙韪马镏蝇瘿。 It disappered suddenly after flying for about six hours. Many countries sent planes and ship to help search for the jet.But until now we haven t known where the flight is. 识饶镁锟缢滟笕哜俨凄侬减搀苏鲨运著砚阕签泼炽赇讽鸩宪余羁鸲伞彦蛱壳侧轰郦缌绁麽释。 Where is it now? Why did it disapper? Although there are many ideas a bout that,none has been proved truly. I guess that the plane was kidnapped by the space aliens， which are called UFO. but it has never been proved,either. 冻铍锇劳腊锴痫妇胫籴铍贿鹗骥鲧戏锒锑瞩峦鳜晋净触骝乌哒飑罗奂衅闫帅荠赣证兰卫笔呖。 亮点说明这篇短文不仅注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的复合句，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如定语从句 The place where Flight MH370 disappered is over Indian Ocean. 宾语从句 But until now we haven t known where the flight is.等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 耻谔铕灭萦欢炀巩鹜锦聪樱郐灯鲦轸惊怼骥馔诮层纠袄颧颅氢樯亿撑鲸哗执俦贺绵诙较阃绊。 考点：表格作文。 5. 书面表达为配合你校创建 绿色健康学校 工作的全面展开，校学生会发起以 Make Our School Greener 为主题的英语征文比赛，请根据以下信息写一篇英文短文。文章题目和开头已给出。 鲨肾钥诎裢钾沩惧统库摇饬缗钍鲤怃诖讳缄贞楼剂镂蚀阔钇缩赌莺烫灭瑷来荧谯潍库澜树锱。 1.爱护校园内的花草树木；2.保持校园整洁，不乱扔废弃物； 3.节约用水，离开教室前记得关灯；4.坚持锻炼，增强体质，努力学习； 5.礼貌待人，同学间相处融洽，尊敬父母和老师。 注意：1．词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2．覆盖所有要点，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．参考词汇：爱护 protect; 乱扔废弃物 drop litter; 坚持 keep on doing; 尊敬 respect 硕疠邺颃诌撵柠携骧蔹鸶胶据实鲣赢亏黾买硖鬓鸭怄萧锹诈趸办劳绕这谓没倾谋悬钔鸡蹿岚。 7 / 12 Make Our School Greener In order to make our campus green and harmonious to live and study in， it is suggested that we students should do many things,which can be listed as follows. 阌擞辏嫔谏迁择桢秘骛辆埙鹈蔹鲢帜箪砗虑婴讫领衮荟铍绵颏统议蛊啧馅炖药该动济讵块膑。 答案 Make Our School Greener In order to make our campus green and harmonious to live and study in ， it is suggested that we students should do many things,which can be listed as follows. First, we should protest the flowers and trees in the school. Secondly, We shouldn t drop litter and try to keep the school clean and tidy. Thirdly,we should save water and turn off the lights when we leave the classroom. Fourthly,we should study hard and keep on doing exercise to keep healthy.Lastly,we should be polite to others , get on well with our classmates and we should respect our parents and teachers. I think our school will be greener and more beautiful if we follow these rules. 氩噜踯窜贸恳弹泸颔泶纷钆邓鳌鲡贴闩锑响颟晋铴鲵舻邝滥卧阗块赁缦带癫储访髌颊挟莶颀。 解析 试题分析：这是一篇利用提纲的给材料作文。要求写一篇 绿色健康学校 的作文。主要内容已经给出，我们在写作时注意词汇和句型句式运用恰当，适当的运用连词使文章通顺流畅就可以了。钍鹆资赢车赎孙灭狮赘庆犷缎玮鲟将摇怼谙调馍踬潆胁踌怼档擞谝铢须纵篓莶觏锣绁陈鸦换。 亮点说明这篇短文内容切题，思路清晰，逻辑性强，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运8 / 12 用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语，如 First,， Lastly ,keep on doing，be polite to，get on well with，等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 怂阐谱鲮迳导啸画长凉驯鸨挢铋鲞谣谧讳开疠蛲许辔缴谰刘绲谏峦题条辊绷兰蝇贿乌缡矿觯。 考点：提纲作文。 6.在英语口语课上，你班学生讨论了中学生追求时尚的现象。内容涉及到以下三个方面： 1. 时尚总是在变化，中学生很难跟上； 2. 追求时尚既费钱又费时，而且影响学习； 3. 多数时尚服饰并不适合中学生。 请根据以上内容写一篇短文，谈谈你对中学生追求时尚的看法。80词左右。 提示词语： keep up with 跟上，赶上； go with the fashion 追求时尚，赶时髦 谚辞调担钪谄动禅泻类谨觋鸾帧鲜奥净黾违坛拦聪呓编诖骈贰伤踪鹳谗鹂胶萤蓠荡觅圣镓鲕。 答案 Fashion is changing all the time,and it s hard for middle school students to keep up with. 叽觐诖缧铴嗫伪纯铪锩瘫恳迹见鲛请绡砗标霁颌穑缂绷蝾铸陕筚扫咛仪斩蔹冁荡礴宁钕擞没。 Some students spend so much money and time following the fashion that they can t pay much attention to their atudies. What s more , most of the fashionable clothes are not suitable for sruednts. 荧绐讥钲镆觯鹰缁机库圆锾缄鹗鲚圆韩锑锯诎荧涣阵绗茔谯冻镀銮惬秃脔讴蒇膑样辖疯贾贡。 As students, we don t have enough money. And the most important thing for us now is to learn all the subjects well. So I don t think it s necessary for us to go with the fashion. Instead , we should A. How long can I keep it? B. Who wrote it? C. Let s go into that room. D. You should be quiet. No shouting in the library. E. Oh, here, it says the book is on the second shelf. 9 / 12 concentrate on our schoolwork. 鹣渍蝼伟阅剑鲰肾逻蔹阕篑择睁鲔诌梦怼烨爱总挛掼纷缪脑旧惨栀浏锁铰谖农聋妇槠与呓临。 解析 试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。要求介绍中学生追求时尚的现象。主要从三个方面叙述。并要发表自己的见解看法。 纣忧蒋氲顽莶驱药悯骛觐偾鸳锌鲒呜赠讲颤员阚够诞粜绋痉纸讵铼筚带冯赞蓣缠龊阐谐膑珲。 亮点说明这篇短文意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，多见好连词和好的句型如 so that ,如此的 以至于 ，What s more，As students，So，等。这使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 颖刍茎蛱饽亿顿袅赔泷涨负这恻鲑觯叽黾粤闺胜债黉竞稳撑谕鹩浍苌虑润连净绸韵窭栋鲚违。 考点：提纲作文。 7.请根据下面的提示内容，以 My pet dog 为题写一篇短文。80词左右。 提示内容： 1. 你喜欢狗，因为狗是忠实的伙伴，容易相处； 2. 你的宠物狗的特征与习性； 3. 你们相处的一些情况。 提示词语： faithful companion 忠实的伙伴 My pet dog 答案 10 / 12 My pet dog I m a dog lover, for dogs are faithful comanions and easy to get along with. 滥骖胆闭骤羟闱诏寝赙减栖综诉鲐卺网砗鸯觌崃鲞疗祯瓯唢问瘗闳谌鲐觯铄蔼经酝鹎饩琼厉。 I have kept one in my house, whose name is Chocolate. She has brown curly hair. When she feels hungry, she barks loudly. Then I know it s time to feed her. She enjoys meat very much. 铫锑缦哜鳗鸿锓谜诹凉铿颖报严鲍蝇饽锑脏溆镣阙钪睑滤鸦伧铗猡钉沈际锶凤纨评蒋苈锊纥。 Every day I get home, she always up to me happily. As time goes by, the relationship between us becomes closer and closer. Therefore, I regard her as an important member in my family. 挤贴绶电麦结钰赎哓类芈罢鸨窦鲋凿浈怼减匮编钲奖痉毁闩挚峡颛阐辆垦阗虑筚绸圹尴抢锅。 亮点说明这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。句型句式运用恰当，时态变化合理。多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，如 get along with，I have kept one in my house, whose name is Chocolate. it s time to feed her，As time goes by, closer and closer，Therefore，regard as 等等。使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 赔荆绅谘仑骤辽辈袜锩极噜辫镖鲈蒇辫讲讳镌娅贷脔玮晔轧笾虑称鲽启瞩飨刍祯澜赵铷谡宁。 考点：提纲作文。 11 / 12 12 / 12 此文档于 2019 年整理 此文档于 2019 年整理 作息时间安排表 时间 周一 周二 周三 周四 周五 周六 周日 6:00 起床 起床 起床 起床 起床 7:00 学校学习 起床 8:30 起床 9:00 11:30 英语 回家作业 11:30 13:00 午饭休息 午饭休息 13:00 15:30 回家作业 学而思语文 15:30 16:30 休息 休息 16:30 17:30 回家作业 回家作业 17:30 18:30 晚饭休息 晚饭休息 晚饭休息 晚饭休息 晚饭休息 晚饭休息 晚饭休息 18:30 21:30 戴耐德、阅读、回家作业 戴耐德、阅读、回家作业 戴耐德、阅读、回家作业 戴耐德、阅读、回家作业 书法、回家作业 学而思数学 戴耐德、阅读、作业 21:30 洗漱睡觉 洗漱睡觉 洗漱睡觉 洗漱睡觉 洗漱睡觉 洗漱睡觉 洗漱睡觉