2019专题35 英语作文之提纲作文类解析版

1. 假设你叫王圆，你现在是一名九年级学生,你现在遇到了一个困难，不知如何解决，你要写信告诉刘老师，他是你们学校的青少年工作者，你希望他给你提供一些建议。字数在 70 词左右。信的要点如下： 1. 你有很多兴趣爱好，但你经常很忙，找不到足够的时间来做想做的事。 2. 你不能在学习和兴趣爱好两方面获得平衡。 3. 所以你感到很有压力，压力的来源有： ①老师给你的压力：家庭作业 ②父母给你的压力：对你要求严格，想你得高分。 ③自己给自己的压力是 （如：想要成为班上最优秀的学生） 4. 你想通过多穿白色的衣服来减少压力，但不是非常有用。 5. 你希望刘老师尽快回信，给你提供意见和帮助。 参考词汇：压力 pressure Dear Mr Liu, I am a Grade 9 student. I have a problem, but I don t know Yours sincerely Wang Yuan 答案 Dear Teacher Liu, My name is WangYuan,and I am a stuent in JuRong No.2 Middle Schoool.I have some problems,and I hope you can help me. I have many hobbies,but I am always busy,I cant find any enough time to do the things what I want to do.I know that its important to have balance in studying and do the things what I like to do. But I have a lot of homework to do every day. And my parents are strick with me in study because they want me to get good marks. I also want to be a top student in our class. So I feel great pressure. I want to wear white clothes to make my pressure be less,but its not very useful. Can you help me? Yours, WangYuan 亮点说明这篇短文写作中注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如 I cant find any enough time to do the things what I want to do，do the things what I like to do，because,and ,so 等等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 考点：提纲作文。 2. 假如你是林凡，得知你的朋友郝强 生病住院，需要一大笔钱，导致他心情沉重、郁郁寡欢。请根据一下的提示给写一封信,给他一些关心和建议。 要点提示： 1. 学会照顾好自己，保持好良好的精神状态（stay in ）。 2. 多于医生、朋友谈心，从中得到帮助（get help from）。 3. 不要担心钱，因为我们会帮你筹集钱（raise money）。 4. 有空我会去看你，帮你补补课（help with ）。 5. 希望你能笑对人生（smile at ）早日健康。 写作要求：要点齐全,要适当发挥。词数 70 个左右。（短文开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Hao Qiang, I am sorry to hear that you are ill in hospital. I understand your feeling very well. But you know nobody can be happy all the time. Your sincerely, Lin Fan. 答案 Dear Hao Qiang, I am sorry to hear that you are ill in hospital. I understand your feeling very well. But you know nobody can be happy all the time. You should learn to take good care of yourself and stay in a good mood. You can talk to the doctors or your friends when you are upset. Try to get help from them.You must follow the doctor s advice and take the medicine on time. Don t worry about money because we can raise money for you. My friend and I will visit when we are free. We can help you with your lesson. I hope you can smile at life and get well soon. Your sincerely, Lin Fan 解析 试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。要求给生病的朋友一些建议同时表示你的关心。主要用到一般现在时。 亮点说明这篇短文不仅注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如 all the time，take good care of， stay in a good mood.等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 考点：提纲作文。 3. 请以 My hobby 为题写一篇英语作文，供英语课上交流。 1. What is your hobby? 2. When and how did you become interested in this hobby? 3. Why do you enjoy your hobby? 4. How does your hobby influence you? 写作要求： 1.根据所提供的问题，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。 2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。词数 80 左右 My hobby 答案 My hobby Everyone has his own hobby , it may give him a lot of happiness. My hobby is reading. Two years ago, I didnt like reading very much. I had plenty of time, but I spent lots of time on playing with co mputers. When I was very young, I didnt think reading book was interesting, because I found nothing more interesting than the computer games. Ive changed now. I enjoy reading novels, because therere lots of interesting stories. When I am in trouble, reading can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Reading keeps me in a good mood and its good for my health. Enjoy your hobby, enjoy your life. 亮点说明这篇短文条理清晰语句通顺。不仅注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语 功 底 扎 实 。 . 如 but I spent lots of time on playing with computers ， When I was very young, ，because I found nothing more interesting than the computer games. ，make me calm down. 等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 考点：提纲作文。 4. 今年，国内外发生了许多重大事件，马航失联（Malaysia flight disappears）事件尤为牵动国人的心，请根据下表提示简要叙述此次事件的经过。 发生事件 Flight MH370 失踪 失联时间 2014 年 3 月 8 日凌晨 失联地点 南印度洋Indian Ocean 失联人员 共 239 人，大部分是中国人，其中还包括一名两岁的婴儿。 失联过程 在飞行六小时后突然消失，多国积极搜寻，至今无果。 失联原因 不明，可能 （考生自拟） 注意：1. 词数: 80 个左右（开头已给出的内容不记入总词数）； 2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译； 3. 条理清楚、语句连贯。 The missing of Flight MH370 Many big events happened this year. The missing of Malaysia flight made us especially concerned. 答案 Flight MH370 just disappered on the early morning of March 8 th, 2014 . The place where Flight MH370 disappered is over Indian Ocean. There were about 239 passengers in the Malaysian airplane MH370,most of them are chinese,among them there is a two year old baby. It disappered suddenly after flying for about six hours. Many countries sent planes and ship to help search for the jet.But until now we haven t known where the flight is. Where is it now? Why did it disapper? Although there are many ideas a bout that,none has been proved truly. I guess that the plane was kidnapped by the space aliens， which are called UFO. but it has never been proved,either. 亮点说明这篇短文不仅注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的复合句，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如定语从句 The place where Flight MH370 disappered is over Indian Ocean. 宾语从句 But until now we haven t known where the flight is.等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 考点：表格作文。 5. 书面表达为配合你校创建 绿色健康学校 工作的全面展开，校学生会发起以 Make Our School Greener 为主题的英语征文比赛，请根据以下信息写一篇英文短文。文章题目和开头已给出。 1.爱护校园内的花草树木；2.保持校园整洁，不乱扔废弃物； 3.节约用水，离开教室前记得关灯；4.坚持锻炼，增强体质，努力学习； 5.礼貌待人，同学间相处融洽，尊敬父母和老师。 注意：1．词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2．覆盖所有要点，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．参考词汇：爱护 protect; 乱扔废弃物 drop litter; 坚持 keep on doing; 尊敬 respect Make Our School Greener In order to make our campus green and harmonious to live and study in， it is suggested that we students should do many things,which can be listed as follows. 答案 Make Our School Greener In order to make our campus green and harmonious to live and study in ， it is suggested that we students should do many things,which can be listed as follows. First, we should protest the flowers and trees in the school. Secondly, We shouldn t drop litter and try to keep the school clean and tidy. Thirdly,we should save water and turn off the lights when we leave the classroom. Fourthly,we should study hard and keep on doing exercise to keep healthy.Lastly,we should be polite to others , get on well with our classmates and we should respect our parents and teachers. I think our school will be greener and more beautiful if we follow these rules. 解析 试题分析：这是一篇利用提纲的给材料作文。要求写一篇 绿色健康学校 的作文。主要内容已经给出，我们在写作时注意词汇和句型句式运用恰当，适当的运用连词使文章通顺流畅就可以了。 亮点说明这篇短文内容切题，思路清晰，逻辑性强，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语，如 First,， Lastly ,keep on doing，be polite to，get on well with，等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 考点：提纲作文。 6.在英语口语课上，你班学生讨论了中学生追求时尚的现象。内容涉及到以下三个方面： 1. 时尚总是在变化，中学生很难跟上； 2. 追求时尚既费钱又费时，而且影响学习； 3. 多数时尚服饰并不适合中学生。 请根据以上内容写一篇短文，谈谈你对中学生追求时尚的看法。80词左右。 提示词语： keep up with 跟上，赶上； go with the fashion 追求时尚，赶时髦 A. How long can I keep it? B. Who wrote it? C. Let s go into that room. D. You should be quiet. No shouting in the library. E. Oh, here, it says the book is on the second shelf. 答案 Fashion is changing all the time,and it s hard for middle school students to keep up with. Some students spend so much money and time following the fashion that they can t pay much attention to their atudies. What s more , most of the fashionable clothes are not suitable for sruednts. As students, we don t have enough money. And the most important thing for us now is to learn all the subjects well. So I don t think it s necessary for us to go with the fashion. Instead , we should concentrate on our schoolwork. 解析 试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。要求介绍中学生追求时尚的现象。主要从三个方面叙述。并要发表自己的见解看法。 亮点说明这篇短文意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，多见好连词和好的句型如 so that ,如此的 以至于 ，What s more，As students，So，等。这使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 考点：提纲作文。 7.请根据下面的提示内容，以 My pet dog 为题写一篇短文。80词左右。 提示内容： 1. 你喜欢狗，因为狗是忠实的伙伴，容易相处； 2. 你的宠物狗的特征与习性； 3. 你们相处的一些情况。 提示词语： faithful companion 忠实的伙伴 My pet dog 答案 My pet dog I m a dog lover, for dogs are faithful comanions and easy to get along with. I have kept one in my house, whose name is Chocolate. She has brown curly hair. When she feels hungry, she barks loudly. Then I know it s time to feed her. She enjoys meat very much. Every day I get home, she always up to me happily. As time goes by, the relationship between us becomes closer and closer. Therefore, I regard her as an important member in my family. 亮点说明这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。句型句式运用恰当，时态变化合理。多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，如 get along with，I have kept one in my house, whose name is Chocolate. it s time to feed her，As time goes by, closer and closer，Therefore，regard as 等等。使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 考点：提纲作文。