点评一下这篇英语作文 是要参赛的.最好提些修改建议.MyfamilylifeEveryonehasawarmfa

点评一下这篇英语作文,是要参赛的.最好提些修改建议.My family lifeEveryone has a warm family,including me.My family is full of fun and happiness.I love my family very much.My dad is always strict with me on my lessons.At weekend,he often lets me do more exercise after I have finished the homework.And he often helps me work out the difficult problems.With his help,I usually study well at school.Though I lose plenty of time to play,I feel very meaningful.So I am grateful to my dad and I never get angry with my parents.I regard my parents as my friends.My mum is a housewife.She is kind to me and she is seldom angry with me.For example,when I am doing my homework for a long time at night,my mum will come to my room carefully with a cup of coffee.The coffee can warm me up.More importantly,I feel warm at that time.My parents always encourage and support me.So I often do some housework without any help to be grateful to them.Such as wash ing dishes and washing some clothes.In short,my family is peace and makes me feel comfortable.And my parents teach me a lot.They are my teachers also friends.I enjoy my family life. 英语作业帮用户2017 09 25

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