助力高考！2011年英语写作题解析！

【考点】R1：提纲类；S4：应用文．菁优网版权所有

【分析】本文是应用文，根据所给要点写一封信，希望得到学校辅导中心的帮助，写作要点：1．本人简介； 2．求助内容：3．约定时间； 4．联系方式．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第一人称为主．时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主．重要短语：take summer courses （上暑期课…），write to sb. （写信给某人），ask for help（寻求帮助），have some difficulties with…（做…有困难），have no idea of （不知道），be anxious to do （渴望做），look forward to doing（期望做）．

【解答】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting.（本人简介）

But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library.【高分句型】（求助内容）I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no lessons on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. 【高分句型】You may e-mail or phone me.

Here are my e-mail address and phone number: Phone: 12345678.

Look forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．