助力高考！2009年高考短文改错题解析

After five years away inmy hometown, I find that 76in改为from

the neighborhood which I used to livingin has changed 77living改为live

a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the olderfish shop 78older改为old

across the street from our middle school weregone. 79were改为are

There existnow a park that has a small river running 80exist改为exists

through. The factory at the corner of Friendship Street and 81√

Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and∧sports 82sports前加a

center has been built in theirplace. The market at the corner of 83their改为its

Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to 84去掉been

a supermarket. Besidesthe bookstore next to our middle 85Besides改为But

school is still there.

【考点】NA：短文改错．

【分析】本文讲述了作者在离开家乡五年之后再次回来所见到的家乡的巨大变化．

【解答】

76．in改为from；考查介词，分析句意为"我离开家乡五年"，away from属于固定搭配，意为"远离，离开"．

77．living改为live；考查动词，used to do是固定搭配，表示"过去常常做某事请"．

78．older改为old；考查形容词，句中没有比较的意思，只是用形容词作定语，修饰fish shop．

79．were改为are；考查动词的时态，根据上文可知饭店和鱼店消失都陈述的是现在的情况．

80．exist改为exists；考查动词的时态，主语a park是单数第三人称．

81．正确

82．sports前加a；考查冠词，sports center中的中心名词时center，是可数名词单数，故用a表示泛指．

83．their改为its；考查物主代词，前文中提到的The factory是单数，结合句意此处的物主代词直呆呆是"工厂的"，故把their改为its．

84．去掉been．短语give way to"让路"，此处要用主动语态．

85．Besides改为But；考查连词，前面讲到很多建筑都不见了，后面说"学校旁边的书店还在那里"，所以要用but表示转折．

【点评】短文改错首先要通读全文，整体理解短文的中心思想，然后根据短文讲述的事情确定文章的基本时态，再运用基础语言知识从时态，语态，句式结构，固定短语等方面彻底进行分析，以便尽快找出短文的错误所在并加以修改．